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2001年1月英语六级作文真题:面试成功的因素

发布时间:2013-05-14 19:08浏览次数:2297
要求:

Directions:  For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic How to Succeed in a Job Interview? You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below: 

1. 面试在求职过程中的作用  

2. 取得面试成功的因素:仪表、举止谈吐、能力、专业知识、自信、实事求是……   

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句式变化多样;作者词汇表达较丰富,但请仔细检查词汇的拼写;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少;请注意分段。

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Today, many applicannts can't avoild a job interview in their job looking. Exactly, job interview plays an important role in our lives,the keys to get a successful job interview, i think,can be generalized like the followings: First,it is advisable to be well dressed,after all, first impression is so important. Second, your ways of speaking and behaviors also need improving. Third, there are few companies caring little about employers' comprehensive abilities and their professional acknowledges. Therefore, job lookers must study hard and excecise themselves in every aspect. Last but not least, it's for our own sake that we must show our confidence and the alttitude of hard-working to our interviewer,it matters a lot.

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