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2006年6月英语六级作文真题:关于旅游

发布时间:2013-05-14 23:33浏览次数:1998
要求:
1、近十年来某城市越来越多人选择出去旅游 
2、出现这种现象的原因 

3、这种现象可能产生的影响 

表格:

1995   2000  2005 
1万人   近4万 12万以上 

用户的作文(系统评分71.5分
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文中学术词汇的使用比较灵活,但有个别拼写错误;若增加一些从句的使用,文章会取得更好的成绩;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。

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With the development of society. an increasing number of people in some city selected to travel outsid in nearly decade,especially in holiday.According the statistic,we can infer that in 1995,there are only 10,000 people go out for travelling,and in 2000,the number raise to 40,000,but in 2005,this figure increase of 3 times compared to 2000. From the statistic above.There are several factors account for this phenomenon.Firstly,Since 1980s,The live standrad of Chinese people improved amazingly,and more and more family can afford the fee of tour.Secondly,all around us are the leaflets about sightseeing,which attract our eye,and we want to get out to see outside world.Last but not least,only we go out,can we see different people and listen various things.It is wonderful. However,this impact of this phenomenon is not neglected by us,For example,in holiday,because of too many people, the price of everything is very high,and the tranffic is vary serious.all of this problem would be an underlying safety trouble.and the thieives would use this chance steal more things. To sum up, travelling is an wonderful thing, but we should learn to select proper time to go out,and when we were outside, we should take care of our thing especially.

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