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文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用学术词汇就更好了；能够使用一些不错的从句；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。
There is an old saying that:it is unwise to put all eggs in one basket.The reason why I insist on the viewpoint that we are all college's students and we will go to work a few years after.If we put all eggs in the same basket it would be had bad advantages to us. With the competition of society,we should develop ourself and do better.My friend Lily is a student who is major of literary and she do better on her major.When she graduated ,she find that it is too many student study about it and she hardly has advantages.So we I came to university ,she told me that I should learn something no include my major like compter and English.We must be prepared to learning something which benifit our nature. To sum up,we are the person who has different aspects and we should fact the fact that varible truth.If we want to have a good development should we develope ourselves.Remeber the old saying:it is unwise to put all eggs in one basket.
