新东方托福高分作文:独自出行还是和朋友一起?

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As traveling is a very pleasant thing,some people like to travel with their friends,but other people,however,may choose to travel alone,as far as concerned with me,I prefer to travel with many friends. Why do people like to travel alone?They may have the chance to enjoy freedom,He/She can start their journey at anytime,to anywhere.Furthermore,they do not keep an eye on how to get along with others. But there are still disadvantages for traveling alone,I insist to travel with friends. Firstly,traveling is not so easy,we need to find hotels and restaurants in a new place,we should be familiar with the transportation,so if we have more people involved in this journey,we can share the tasks so that everyone will enjoy this travel. Secondly,we may get the help from each other under certain circumstances,for example,we may get some people lost,or get sick in the journey,we may feel hardly to get up on time in the morning,then our friends can give us a hand to overcome many difficulties. Thirdly,we can have more fun with friends when we feel boring during the long journey,we can talk with each other and play cards with each other,that will help us to get through. In conclusion,I would like to travel with many friends rather than travel alone,the trip will be easier and happier with my friends' company.