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江苏省盐城市初级中学2011届九年级上学期期末考试写作:与父母相处的问题

发布时间:2013-06-24 18:03浏览次数:2118
要求:
你将代表学校参加盐城市中学生英语演讲比赛,演讲的题目是“Learning to get along with our parents”。请你用英语写一篇演讲稿,内容要点如下:


现象

经常跟父母发火,甚至几天不讲话

原因
1、父母过分关注分数
2、我们……

措施(不少于三点)
1、我们应该和父母沟通
2、我们……
3、我们……

要求:

1、表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯;

2、必须包括所有相关信息,并作适当的发挥;
3、词数:100词左右(演讲稿的开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数);
4、不得使用真实姓名和校名等。
Good morning, ladies and gentlemen. Today my topic is ‘Learning to get along with our parents’.
These days, most of us feel it is hard to get along with our parents. ____________________
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    That’s all for my speech. Thank you!
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句法知识不错,多多加强复杂句的练习;文章词汇表达多样性要提高,单词拼写方面还要继续努力;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。

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Learning to get along with our parents Good morning, ladies and gentlemen. Today my topic is ‘Learning to get along with our parents’.These days, most of us feel it is hard to get along with our parents. we often gets angery with our parents only for mang little thing .we can hardly say one world with them just beacause we are unhappy. parents always pay more atttention to our scores than our healthy. we want to talk something intresting with them ,but they always too much things to do. we thank we shoud get on well with them . we can help them to do some homework. we can have a trip with them.we can see an intresting movie as well. we thing our parents love us deeply,and so do we.

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