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We have just moved to a new house in Bridlge Street. It is not only beautiful but is very modren, so it looks strage for some people. Work on it finished the end of the last year. Our house has three bedrooms, a large living room, a bright kictch and there is a lovely bathroom. My parents lives in one bedroom and I lives in another one. We make the third room as a study and there are over thosusands books in it. All of us like to sit in the sofa which was laid in the living room and watch TV. Although our house is neither large or expensive, I ove it very much because it's lively and warm.