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小学二年级英语作文:Our house

发布时间:2013-05-15 11:49浏览次数:5576
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用英语描述下自己的家,字数在100字以内.
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句法知识不错,多多加强复杂句的练习;作者能较熟练地使用丰富的词汇,但请加强单词拼写的检查;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少;请注意分段。

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We have just moved to a new house in Bridlge Street. It is not only beautiful but is very modren, so it looks strage for some people. Work on it finished the end of the last year. Our house has three bedrooms, a large living room, a bright kictch and there is a lovely bathroom. My parents lives in one bedroom and I lives in another one. We make the third room as a study and there are over thosusands books in it. All of us like to sit in the sofa which was laid in the living room and watch TV. Although our house is neither large or expensive, I ove it very much because it's lively and warm.

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