小学二年级英语作文:My holiday

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I like spending my holidays at my mother's with my son, Ted. Last Spring Festival, we decided to go to by train. Ted had never travelled on a train, so he is exciting. He asked me everything which he has seen. After a time, he began running along the train and talking with other people we didn't know. I had to follow behind him to make sure he was safe. It's a long and tired jounery for me, but for Ted, it's very intesting. When we arrieved at the railway station, it was nearly middled night, Ted was sleeping soundly.