2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第1套):The most interesting place

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Ｈello Ken, I am glade to hear that you will visit my hometown Guilin soon.Our hometown is really a beautiful place you deserve to visit.There are many beautiful sightseeing here. Guilin is famouse for its beautiful mountain and water.The mountain here is high and the water is very clear ,you can even see the bottow of the river .The whole city is surrouding with water and mountain.You can see the trees growing well beside you when you walking in the stree.