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the impact of the internet on the interpersonal communication As we can see,the internet takes an more and more important role in our daily life nowadays .It seems that it is our best friend so that we can't leave it whether at home or on the outside.when we visit our friends or our families,we always ignore them ,instead,we play our phones or computers with our head down and communicate with our net friends ,even if we don't know them .So we also are called "Phubbing"now.The internet ,I,think,has a serious effect on our impersonal communication.With the development QQ,micro-letter and other communication tools, we don't or less communicate face to face or make a phone call but use these tools.Because we think they are wasting our time. Of course,we can know or communicate with more people from different countrise or with different culture background by these tools.But do we really know about them ?--NO,we don't really konw who they are ,where they are from .We just talk with them about something marginal instead of our real information just like the most net friends do.But in fact ,we ignore the people around us or have less time spend with our classmates friends or families because of this .
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