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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
文中句子偏简单，可增加从句使用量；文中词汇丰富度和学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间，文中有较多拼写错误；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少；可以适当增加副词的使用。
With our country developing,internet is important for us.We use the internet to communicate each other.we don't like go out and chat with friends and parents. Electronic communication can't replace face-to-face contact.because of we need to meet friend.We need to look after myself.the picture show us a pair of parents miss their kid .But they don't meet his child because the child don't go downstairs . The internet change my life and people become more and more infifferent.One the hand,we enjoy the convenient computer ,one the other hand,we should change my attitude to our opoinon.
