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适当增加学术词汇的使用，拼写错误稍微有点多；可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。
Nowadays,more and more interviews report that there are many students additted to playing computer games in order to discontinue their studies.There is no doubt that they waste their lives ,therefore,what can we do to make our life meaningful? The greatest use of life is to spend it for something that will outlast it.The following examples will conform it.Steve Jods,the CEO of Apple,devotes himself to researching how to make mobile phone becomes simpler and have more functions,of course,he successed.Bill Gates,the father of the Internet,he is interested in computer and studied it deeper and deeper,in the end ,he builds his kingdom of the software all over the world. I also think a lot about this question.I am majored in Landscape Architect.I am absorded in designing.Thus,I will scan a plenty of useful books to enrich my knowledge and go to visit much more famous gardens to study wonderfui build skills.With happiness and meaningful lifetime.
