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学术词汇需要继续积累，单词拼写不错；若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更不错；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。
Nowadays,more and more interviews report that there are many students addictted to playing computer games in order to discontinue their studies.There is no doubt that they waste their lives ,therefore,what can we do to make our life meaningful? The greatest use of life is to spend it for something that will outlast it.The following examples will confirm it.Steve Jods,the CEO of Apple,devotes himself to researching how to make mobile phone becomes simpler and have more flexible,of course,he succeed.Bill Gates,the father of the Internet,he is interested in computer and studied it deeper and deeper,in the end ,he builds his kingdom of the software all over the world. I also think a lot about this question.I am majored in Landscape Architect.I am absorbed in designing.Thus,I will look a plenty of useful books to enrich my knowledge and go to visit much more famous gardens to study wonderful building skills.
