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There is a hot argument that whether we do a good deed should be rewarded.In one hand,somebody think people should be rewarded who do a good deed.Because they think these people who do a good deed are very kind and warmhearted,so we should a give them a reward to show our admire and regard them as a example try to help other people in our daily life.By this way we can make our society more friendly and warmer than before and by the way it can reduce the crime rate in our life. But every coins has two sides, on the other hand some people think we should learn to LeiFeng who don't need a reward.In their opinion they think people who do a good deed is just want to help others.They do a good deed can also reflect their worth,this can make them satisfied and happy.If we give them a reward,maybe they would appreciate it,but also find it a little insulting.So it's obvious to us,we don't need give a reward to the people who do a good deed. As far as for me,I think it's all up to the one who receive a help to decide it.Because it's our natural state to be thankful the man whom ever helped us.If juts purely decide to give a reward or not ,maybe it's a rude way to the man or woman whom help us.So we should respect each other and keep a kind heart to strangers.