可适当增加从句的使用;作者能较熟练地使用较丰富词汇,以及部分学术词汇,单词拼写也要仔细;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
Confronted with various kinds of information, morden people tend to trust whatever they have heared or seen. However, it is unwise to jump to conclusion upon seeing or hearing because the things they hear or see can not all correct. Living in the information full of changes, we should discern clearly right from wrong. In is obvious that some information is so misleading that we can not believe.For instance, several years ago, nuclear pollution in japan, a host of people ,especially middle aged women and seniors who firmly believe salt can prevent them from rediation, buying the salt in a hurry, which is radiculous. Alao, although it is generally accepted that a picture can present amount of information, some picture can not trust in this day owing to the photoship previling all around the world. In short, it is essential for us to hold correct attitudes towards information that we have heared or seen. Instead of drawing the conclusion in a hurry, we should raise our awareness of judging right from wrong and look before leap. I firmly believe a better future is awaiting us if we make each decision with deep thinking.
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