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作者词汇表达丰富度较高，就是学术词汇用的太少；有效的运用了一些复杂句；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。
I would like invite my foreign friend to my lovely hometown--ShiYan, a but beautiful small city located in northwest Hubei province. There is a series of mountains surround the city and springs run through the city. When you come here, do remember to pay a visit to the Wudang Mountain, once you climbed up to the top, just overlook around, the wild view will make you feel such a freedom and all the mountains around you are bowing to you, that just what makes you feel youself a king. Besides, the sights along the way are worthy seeing, during your trip you may visit numbers of old archtectures , several beautiful lakes with playing swans and monkeys. It is such a place which push you hugging the nature. ShiYan is a city not beautiful but warm. People here are kind enough to make you feel ease and warm. We are all looking forward your coming, my dear friends.
