文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用学术词汇就更好了;熟练使用了一些长难句;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
I would like invite my foreign friend to my hometown--ShiYan, a beautiful small city located in northwest Hubei province. There is a series of mountains surround the city and springs run through the city. When you come here, do remember to pay a visit to the Wudang Mountain, once you climbed up to the top, just overlook around, the broad view will make you feel such a freedom and all the mountains around you are bowing to you, that just what makes you feel yourself a king. Besides, the sights along the way are worthy to be seen, during your trip, you may visit numbers of old architectures, there are several beautiful lakes with playing swans and monkeys. ShiYan is a city not beautiful but warm. People here are kind enough to make you feel ease and warm. We are all looking forward to your coming, my dear friends.