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文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用学术词汇就更好了；句式变化较为明显，可适当增加从句的使用；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。
I would like invite my foreign friend to my hometown--ShiYan, a beautiful small city located in northwest Hubei province. There is a series of mountains surround the city and springs run through the city. When you come here, do remember to pay a visit to the Wudang Mountain, once you climbed up to the top, just overlook around, the broad view will make you feel such a freedom and all the mountains around you are bowing to you, that just what makes you feel yourself a king. Besides, during your trip, you may visit numbers of old architectures, there are several beautiful lakes with playing swans and monkeys. ShiYan is a city not beautiful but warm. People here are kind enough to make you feel ease and warm. We are all looking forward to your coming, my dear friends.
