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2011年6月英语六级作文真题:热衷证书考试

发布时间:2013-05-18 10:46浏览次数:3102
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题目 My opinion on certificate craze
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1.现在许多人热衷于各类证书考试
2.其目的各不相同
3.在我看来……
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句法知识很棒,若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更出色;文中能较熟练地使用一定的学术词汇,但词汇表达多样性不高,拼写检查还需加强;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。

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My Opinion On Certificate Craze nowadays,there is no doubt that more and more people concern on certtificate.such as ect4,cet6 and the computer and so on. no one can deny that our society become more and more development,with the society development,we need more talent personal.so,now students employment become more difficult.many students education upon unemployment.therefore,in order to they can find a good job when eduction.they need certtificate.however,some student even not know why they need so many certtificate.they just follow from others.those student don't have a clear aim.and the rest students certtificate without any aim,just because the school require they do. in opinions,i think we need certtificate,but in the same time,we need know why we need those certtificates,and what certtificates we need is impont too.

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