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My Opinion On Certificate Craze nowadays,there is no doubt that more and more people concern on certtificate.such as ect4,cet6 and the computer and so on. no one can deny that our society become more and more development,with the society development,we need more talent personal.so,now students employment become more difficult.many students education upon unemployment.therefore,in order to they can find a good job when eduction.they need certtificate.however,some student even not know why they need so many certtificate.they just follow from others.those student don't have a clear aim.and the rest students certtificate without any aim,just because the school require they do. in opinions,i think we need certtificate,but in the same time,we need know why we need those certtificates,and what certtificates we need is impont too.