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I like travelling, but I don't like losing my way. I went on an excursion recenlty, but my trip took me longer than I expected. " I 'm going to Great Bridge, " I said to the condutor as I got on the bus, " but I don't know where it is. " " I'll tell you where to get off, " answered the conduct. I sat in the front of the bus to get a good view of the countryside. After a time, the bus stop. Looking around, I realized with a shock that I am the only passenger left on the bus. " You'll have to get off here, " said the conduct. " This is as far as we go. " " Is this Great Street? " I asked. " Oh dear, " said the conductor, " I forgot to put you off. " " It doesn't matter, " I said." I'll get off here. "