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小学二年级英语作文:A Trip

发布时间:2013-05-15 11:44浏览次数:2143
要求:
用英语描述下自己的一次旅游,字数在100字以内.
用户的作文(系统评分58.0分
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文章词汇表达比较丰富,但学术词汇稍显欠缺,此外拼写检查要重视;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意个别句子错误;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。

用户练习作文:

I like travelling, but I don't like losing my way. I went on an excursion recenlty, but my trip took me longer than I expected. " I 'm going to Great Bridge, " I said to the condutor as I got on the bus, " but I don't know where it is. " " I'll tell you where to get off, " answered the conduct. I sat in the front of the bus to get a good view of the countryside. After a time, the bus stop. Looking around, I realized with a shock that I am the only passenger left on the bus. " You'll have to get off here, " said the conduct. " This is as far as we go. " " Is this Great Street? " I asked. " Oh dear, " said the conductor, " I forgot to put you off. " " It doesn't matter, " I said." I'll get off here. "

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