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Education As A Lifelong Process As the saying gone,Knowledge can changes people‘s destiny,So we see how important for us to accept education in modem society,With the rapid development of economy and scientific technology,We depend on knowledge to change the world,Although learning knowledge is come from education,With the progress of society,So we should keep studing all the time,So i think education as a lifelong process. Firstly,Accept education can help us learn more knowledge,Including science、Natural、Society、edu……It no only can improve our social ability but also secure good jobs.Secondly,I think education as a lifelong process ,Because should improve ourselves by learning all the time.As the old saying gone:Learn more untill die. Education as a lifelong process,No matter how strong you are,How abundant knowledge you have.Keep learning.