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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
文中词汇表达方面较丰富灵活，但在学术词汇的积累上还要再接再厉；简单句比重稍微偏高，注意个别句子错误；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。
Electronic Communication Through this picture we can see that a pair of parents communicate with their child by computer.Because of the Internet,our way of communication changes a lot.Many years agowe communicated with others by writing a letter and having a face–to–face contact.But now it is replaced by electronic communication. Though electronic communication is more convenience,faster and cheaper,it also has some disadvantage.Firstly,some words which are eent by a message may lack emotion.It may be not reach your exception.Secondly,you donn't know which feelings they have after readers read it.So it miss its real meaning.The last but not least when someone want to communicate with your,the real atmeption isn't that they want to recieve your messages.Instead of it,they want to hear your voice and want you to company with them. Electronic communication cann't replace face–to–face contact.So we should decrease electronic communication and often leave some times for people who love you to talk with them by face–to–face.
