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文中词汇表达方面较丰富灵活，但在学术词汇的积累上还要再接再厉；可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。
A wealth of imformation creates a poverty of attention With the Interent developing ripidly,people accepting much more information than before.Because of a large sum of information,people usually feel confused about which information is advantage or not. In recent years,people often can look through on web net,and then find out plenty of messages that we may use.However, it also have a problem that it isn't all of good for ourselves.So we should select the information that really help us.But how to do it?Firstly,people will realize what is the best essential that we need.Secondly,we should pick the useful one up by such a vast information.Above all,we must have a proper attitude for information explosion. From my perpective, we sure can make something simply by using the vast of information.But we must know that it isn't allusefully for our life.Though we the information can help us make some choices,we have to possess a powerful heart that confirm what we really want to do.
