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采用了一些简单的从句；文中能较熟练地使用一定的学术词汇，但词汇表达多样性不高，拼写检查还需加强；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。
Everyone readed the book that david have written .It told us that we should save our time so that we will reget and cry.thus,we must lead a good happy life which it makes us plasured. as for us ,we are collage students,it is important for us to how to spend sometime doing benefitical things .Everyone wants to lead a good benefitical life .But ,do we come true it ? in my opinion ,firstly,we ought to study hard so that wo can get a good grades.apperantly,we need to a good habit that get up erarly and keep up coming true our dream. then ,we also jion some team which we are interesting and exercise our ideal.Because it can help us set up a good aim and make a good friends. In addition ,we must pay a attention to a good class that it help us find willing good job in a future . In a conclusion ,It is political to how to spend a good and benefitical life .If we can compose it,we will get a good future.
