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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):以貌取人

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:04浏览次数:8972
要求:

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it isunwise to judge a person by their appearance. You can give explain toillustrate your point .

You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。

用户的作文(系统评分68.0分
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可适当增加从句的使用,注意文中的一些小错误;作者词汇量比较丰富,一些学术词汇的使用也比较灵活,但要避免出现拼写错误;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。

用户练习作文:

Nowadays,the in growing people judge a person by their apperance.The phenomenon become common concern of individuals.It will lead to a problem that people losing the judging skill .so, the conpect that it is unwise to judge a person by their apperance is very significance . The reasons of this phenomenon is complicated,but we can ,to a large extent,owe it to the following factors.To begin with,the traditional's view is sticked in people's heart.So,the individuals hold the view that a beautiful person is present the kindly.Then,a perfect look will bring a rosy feeling.For example,the choice that a beautiful girl and a ugly is obvious.Finally,the society is very reality. For my part, we should change the view.we can try to judge a person by their work and relation with friend,meanwhile,it is important than people learn the skill about the judging.The society is also a good tool,it should provide some ture concepts to judge a person.that is all about my opinions.

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