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PARENTS In china, most parents need to work hard for their family. Because, they must take care of their aged parents and bring up children. But to a lot of parents, the most important seems that how to raise kids and making them be better. So when their children were born, parents start buying the best food, clothes and other thing that they can pay for it for their children. As soon as their children are old enough to go to school, parents will try their best to find which school that they think of the best one to let their children to go. They don’t want their children behind others. Today there is a popular word among the parents‘The children can’t lose at the starting line’. Their will pay great attention to their children, especially mother. She has no time to hang out with friends, enjoy a play, dress herself and so on. They put pressure on themselves and their children. Some parents even are not going to stand for their children disobeying their. They believe in that ‘spare the rod and spoil the child’. No matter what way to educate children, they all mean loving children.