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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第2套):鸡蛋放到一个篮子

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:11浏览次数:10395
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题目:It is unwise to put all eggs in one basket.把全部鸡蛋放到一个篮子里是不明智的。
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It is unwise to put all eggs in one basket. Everyone knows that eggs are easy to be broken.And once you put all eggs in one basket,it is more possible that all of your eggs will be broken.Therefore it is unwise to put all eggs in one basket. You have to put eggs into different baskets so that the possibility of that all eggs are broken is very small.Besides,you may easy to administer all the eggs and distinguish them. Anyway,the way to put all eggs in one basket is totally wrong and reckless.People have to think about the different results of things so thay can make preparations for some emergencies and reduce the possibility of bad things. In my opinion,people have to predict something bad and make preparations to face the emergency peacefully.It is unwise to put all eggs in one basket.

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