2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

若增加一些长难句的使用，文章会更好；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用；作者学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间，词汇表达灵活性也要提高，单词拼写错误较多。

Contemporary,the many of goods possess excessive packaging.For example,some produce is so cheaper,but if it have a nice packaging,it woud be a worthy goods.Maybe consumers needn't the gorgeous packaing,only they want a good price. This phenomenon is appeard make customers feeling depressed.Of course.merchants in order to gain an advantage the best.Through the excessive package can cover up produce disadvantages.Moreover,a perfect package draw attention to consumers eyes.Some of the customer prefer the excessive package goods. Accoding to the phenomenon,i posses some point of view statement.First of all,i aginst excessive packageing.I think it is cause weste and environmental protection.The second,excessive packaging lead to custemer to buy expenssive things.It is not cost-effective. Relevant departments of the unit ought to control this things.