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2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

发布时间:2013-05-17 11:37浏览次数:9565
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题目 My views on Online Shopping
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1. 现在网购已经成为一种时尚  
2. 网上购物有很多好处,但也有不少问题 
3. 我的建议 
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Would you like shopping?Are you shopping on the net frequently?Maybe you will say both "Yes" to me.Sure,it's so common that the quantity of people who shopping in the Internet rise so many in some developed regions recent years.I have to say that the Internet is so crucial to our daily life.No doubt that it's convenient so much.Just in front of a computer,we can receive things wanted a few days.We just wait at the home rather than go shopping in all kinds of markets by foot.So cool it is! In reality,some people like shopping in the Internet.The reasons are showed apparently.Of course,some other reasons attract many people except for convenient.Such as price!You can see that the commodity you cost on the net cheaper than market.So the more and more people are crazy about shopping in the Internet.While others people dislike to buy something in the Internet.They have their own views on online shopping.For example,they usually think the online commodity seems bad in quality,because see it from the computer screen rather than touch it by themselves.Just feel not dependable.That's why my mom always object me to buy things from Internet. In summary,we see the both advantages and disadvantages about online shopping.And the online shopping brings people to the entertainment also exist objectively.In the end,how do you think this phenomenon?

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