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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第3套):网络沟通

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:41浏览次数:12888
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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.


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The impact of the Internet on the way people communicate Internet has great influence on the way people communicate ,so much so that an increasing number of individuals contend that electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. However ,as the picture warns us ,face-to-face can do more than simply communicating on internet . There are two mainly reasons .On the one hand ,you can eat dinner togher with your family when you are face-to-face .You will feel more love from your parent .On the other hand ,although communicating on internet is very convinient ,it may make people become indifference ,and then forget to talk with the people face-to-face . In one word ,the internet provide convinient for people ,but people should be fully aware of the essence of face-to-face .Only in this way can we feel more happniess .

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