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2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:38浏览次数:71632
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Suppose a foreign friend of yours is going to visit your hometown,what is the most interestingplace you would like to take him/her to see and why?
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With the Internet widespread in all aspects of society,tremendous weird phenomena are scrambling to spring up in tune with it,one of which is displaying wealth online,making people so astonished at the extravagant life the rich lead as well as arousing a heated debate among the public. However,opinions concerning this widely vary.Some view it as nothing more than showing off in order to attain others’ attention to fulfill their vanity.While those who have an insight into the issue maintain that it’s not only an anecdote emerged only for people to talk about,but reflects on how wide the gap between the poor and the rich. As far as I’m concerned,I’m in favor of the latter.After a period of political and economic modernization,it’s high time for China to reexamine the results Because the perceive accomplishments may as well bring out detrimental aspects. As we witness now,so much does the rich possess that they squander without limits.Meantime,the poor can lead a miserable life. To sum up,what really matters isn’t to condemn the act but to resolve to diminish the demerits the gap bring about.

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