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2006年12月英语六级作文真题:西方的节日

发布时间:2013-05-14 23:36浏览次数:1491
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The Celebration of Western Festivals 
 1、现在国内不少人喜欢过西方的一些节日 
 2、产生这种现象的原因 
 3、这种现象可能带来的影响 
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Foucing on Relevant Information As the old saying goes, A wealth of information creats a poverty of attention. Therefore, to prevent from foucing on irrelevant information is important. To begin with, in many companies, managers prefer to only collect messages about other companies online rather than ask some employers to collect messeages. They believe that it may let them get messages efficiently. However, there are much wrong information in the Internet, which may enable managers to spent too much time on these information. After all, collecting messages from many way is important, such as TV, Internet, people, books and so on. What's more, if you hope to select a good university. you should talk with undergraduates about the level of universities. Through this way, you can get correct information instead of wrong information online. As a result, you can ensure to select good schools. In a word, it is unwise to only collect information online. We should get informations from many ways or from the best ways you think.

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