4. 突然,一只巨大的蚂蚁向她飞快跑去,她很害怕,大声呼救但没人回答。最后她醒过来,原来只是一个梦。
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Hi Martin, Last week I read two articles from the book “Alice in Wonderland” in the English class and they are quite interesting. Yesterday night, I saw Alice standing beside my bed. She invited me to Wonderland. When we got to Wonderland, flowers sang and danced like people/were singing and dancing like people. They smiled and said hello to her. Monkeys, goldfish and camels flew around like birds in the sky. I tried/did my best to fly but still failed. Suddenly, a big ant ran quickly to me. I felt very afraid. I shouted for help but nobody replied. In the end I woke up and found it was just a dream. Isn’t that interesting? All the best Mary