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2014年初中毕业升学考试英语作文集锦143:Alice in Wonderland

发布时间:2015-05-29 14:07浏览次数:853
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上星期英语课Mary读了“Alice in Wonderland”里的两篇文章,觉得很有趣。她想写信给美国的笔友Martin,介绍自己的奇特经历。词数80词左右。开头已给出,不计入总词数。
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1. 昨天夜里,她看见爱丽丝站在床边,邀请她去参观仙境(Wonderland)。
2. 到达仙境后,那儿的花像人一样唱歌跳舞,它们向她微笑打招呼。
3. 猴子、金鱼和骆驼像鸟一样在天上飞来飞去,她用尽全力飞但是失败了。

4. 突然,一只巨大的蚂蚁向她飞快跑去,她很害怕,大声呼救但没人回答。最后她醒过来,原来只是一个梦。


Hi Martin,
Last week I read two articles from the book “Alice in Wonderland” in the English class and they are quite interesting.


Isn’t that interesting?


All the best
Mary
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Hi Martin, Last week I read two articles from the book “Alice in Wonderland” in the English class and they are quite interesting. Yesterday night, I saw Alice standing beside my bed. She invited me to Wonderland. When we got to Wonderland, flowers sang and danced like people/were singing and dancing like people. They smiled and said hello to her. Monkeys, goldfish and camels flew around like birds in the sky. I tried/did my best to fly but still failed. Suddenly, a big ant ran quickly to me. I felt very afraid. I shouted for help but nobody replied. In the end I woke up and found it was just a dream. Isn’t that interesting? All the best Mary

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