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Dear Xiao Wang, You cannot imagine how excited I am when hearing that you are going to visit me.I welcome you with open arms. As you know,my apartment is near the sea.So,every morning we can run on the beach,appreciate the sunrise or watch the waves breaking the rocks.And we can go where we like to take a stroll.You must be thrilled when I show you around the busy market.There are all types of flowers,sncks and souvenirs,which are very special.Besides,since shopping is your favorite thing,I am sure to take you to the biggest shopping center to buy whatever you like.Sunset will find us going back home with laghter. However,there are also some things you ought to pay attention to.Don't forget your sun glasses when you come here owing to the sun light,otherwise it is harmful to your eyes.Furthermore,take your fancy swimsuit with you and it is certain that you will have a good time in the cool water. Yours, Zhang Ying