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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第1套):网络教育

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:37浏览次数:9038
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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the internet on learning and then explain why education doesn't simply mean learning to obtain information. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

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The cortoon said that the father and the mother is writting letter used email to their son,because they look forward to seeing him again the next time his computer crash and he can come downstairs for something to eat thought the son and they live toghger.According to the pictuer ,with the development of the Internet ,it has great impact on the way people communnicate. As parents and son in the picture,the Internet makes people communicated less face to face which maybe both live nearly even in a house.However,I consider that electronic communication can not repale face-to-face contact.On the one hand ,face-to-face contact can contribute to people's inspirated communication so that reach a secret agreement.On the other hand,it's neccesary to finsh the project successful through face-to -face contact. In a word,although it's convenient to electronic communication for people,face-to-face contact take place impossible..

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