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2013年专四作文真题附范文:节约花钱

发布时间:2013-06-07 13:03浏览次数:33570
要求:
Most of us, as students, are careful with our money in daily life: we collect all kinds of coupons(优惠券); we look for group-buy deals if we eat out or travel; we don't buy clothes unless in a sale. However, some people think that all this may not make us smart consumers. What is your opinion?

You are to write in three parts.
In the first part, state specifically what your opinion is.
In the second part, provide one or two reasons or your experience (s) to support your opinion. 
In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary.

You should supply an appropriate title for your composition.

Marks will be awarded for content, organization, language and appropriateness. Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.

字数:300 满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分23.5分
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用户练习作文:

As we all know, China’s soft drinks market is a later starter compared with other countries. Before 80s of 20th century, the most kinds of the soft drinks in China are sodas. Then there are kinds of soft drinks exist. Such as cola, bottled water enters the market. And the tea drinks prevails and brings a tide of consumption. With the improvement of consumption standard, customers’ purchase power has improved. The sales volume of soft drinks market increases at a rate of 200% per year. In this condition, it is a large market with opportunities, profits and risks. The domestic soft drinks industry shows its strength and advantage. Nevertheless, there still are some issues needed to be noticed: 1. Fierce race. Domestic soft drinks and foreign products enter into China’s market. 2. Small production scale and unreasonable regional distribution. 3. Underdevelopment of markets and not so impressive image of product. 4. Lack of the value of brand and customer loyalty. In this environment, it is inevitable to enhance the ability of competition and pay more attention to the above issues. Or the product or even the company will decline and become obsolete.

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