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新课标八年级单元测试写作:我的理想

发布时间:2013-06-26 18:00浏览次数:9249
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我喜欢英语,我想在10年以后当一位英语老师。我要尽可能教好我的学生。我要尽量用英语讲课。我要努力使我的课讲得生动有趣。

另外,学生们都喜欢听老师讲故事,所以我要经常给学生讲英语故事,使他们对英语感兴趣,从而能提高他们的听力。我相信我能成为一个好老师的。


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I have a dream, that is, one day my parents get old, they will not have any diseases, any pains or any sorrow. They will live happily until the day they have to leave for the other world. There’s always plenty of sunshine in their everyday life. This is my dream and it is my greatest happiness.I have a dream, that is, one day all the dogs in the world will have their homes. They will be kindly taken care of, they will be deeply loved and they will be the most valuable friends to people. I also hope, all the people in the world will realize that dogs are the connection between human beings and heaven. This is my dream and it is my greatest happiness.I have a dream, that is one day there will be no wars in the world. No blood, no wounds, no deaths, no hate, only love and responsibility. We live together and love each other. There is no difference between us., this is my dream, this my greatest happiness. I have a dream , I have thousands of dreams. I dream that one day they can come true.This is my dream and it is my greatest happiness.

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