可适当增加长句和复杂句的使用;文章层次较为清晰;文中词汇较灵活,但要注意积累高级词汇,拼写错误也要注意。
In current,many families have only one child.They share all the love to the only child.It is common to see that parents spoil their child.They do everything for them instead of foster their ability to be independent.Parents suppose that the children should pay more attention to studying,they believe that it is meaningless to do other things except learning. To cultivate chiidren's independence, what can the parents do? First of all, in my opinion,give them adequate space to grow,parents should encourage children to play free, to think free.Secondly,parents should tell the children that they can do everything they can by themselves by hard work.Once they achive their goal independently,they will be more confident and more independent.