拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;文章在句法方面做的很棒,从句和复杂句的使用不错;行文较为流畅,作者文中过渡词使用的不错。
Owing to the convenience of it,disposal bags had been used widespread which cause some problems.Now I will talk about the problems that are caused by disposal bags. First,disposal bags are abandoned casually by people who buy something needed to be put into disposal bags.However,they can do a lot of harm to the environment,especially to the farmlands.There are a large number of farmlands polluted heavily by the disposal bags so the seeds couldn't be planted on them.Even worse,disposal bags are made of oil and so on.To make them must consume a large amount of oil every year and then turn up the phenomena of being lack in oil.And the lack of recycle of disposal bags aggravates that. So,Limiting the use of disposal bags makes the environment become more beautiful and can save our most valuable resources.