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文章用词灵活多样，高级词汇使用也比较准确；过渡词很丰富，衔接词同时使用的恰到好处；能够很好的使用长难句且句法很棒。
These years,an increasing number of juvenile crimes is the whole society.It warns us all that it's high time that we had to attach great importance to students' mental development rather than merely their physical health. With the rapid development of economy,the average standard of individual's living is obviously higher than before.The education becomes more and more essential to almost each family. However,school seems to focus too much on children's academic performance with tense study plan,which usually make them neglect students' mental development.In my opinion,school should give more lectures on students' mental health ,and meanwhile,they shouldn't put the grade in the first place to estimate each student's good or bad. Last but not the least,students themselves should keep away from negative things such as violent and bloody movies or some illegal organizations.For me,keeping a positive mind and having a sound mentality can definitely bring each a bright future.
