2008年12月英语六级作文真题:提高心理健康

文章用词灵活多样，高级词汇使用也比较准确；过渡词很丰富，衔接词同时使用的恰到好处；作者有一定功底，可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆。

These years,an increasing number of juvenile crimes is shocking the whole society.It warns us all that it's high time that we had to attach great importance to students' mental development rather than merely their physical health. With the rapid development of economy,the average standard of individual's living is obviously higher than before.Education becomes more and more essential to almost each family.However,school seems to focus too much on children's academic performance with tense study plan,which usually makes them neglect students' mental development.In my opinion,school should deliever more lectures on students' mental health ,and meanwhile,they shouldn't put the grade in the first place to estimate each student's good or bad. Last but not least,students themselves should keep away from negative things such as violent and bloody movies or some illegal activities.For me,keeping a positive mind and having a sound mentality can definitely bring each a bright future.