2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

文中应增加一些长难句的使用，会为文章添彩；文中词汇较灵活，但要注意积累高级词汇，拼写错误也要注意；过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错。

As is showed in the picture that someone who have higher degree can earn much more money.Worse still,someone who has lower degree, unemployments is up to 14.1%.How terrible!As far as I am concerned,the degree is important for us to find work.the reason why I say that as follows. At present,majority company are willing to admit person who have high degree.Because it proved you have more abilities than others.In fact,if you have high degree,you will find a job easy and you will make more money than others.So we must study hard to get higher degree. By and large,we try our best to get the degree so that we can find the a dood job.