2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

文章结构不错，使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词；文中如若增加一些长难句的使用，会为文章添彩；文中词汇较灵活，但要注意积累高级词汇，拼写错误也要注意。

As is showed in the picture that someone who have the higher degree can earn much more money.Worse still,someone who has lower degree, unemployments is up to 14.1%.As far as I am concerned,the degree is important for us to find work.the reason why I say that as follows. At present,majority company are willing to admit person who have high degree.Because it proved you have more abilities than others.In fact,if you have high degree,you will find a job easy and you will make more money than others.So we must study hard to get higher degree. By and large,we try our best to get the degree so that we can find the a dood job.