2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

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As is showed in the picture that someone who have the higher degree can earn much more money.Worse still,someone who has lower degree, unemployments is up to 14.1%.As far as I am concerned,the degree is important for us to find work.the reason why I say that as follows. At present,majority company are willing to admit person who have high degree.Because it proved you have more abilities than others.In fact,if you have high degree,you will find a job easy and you will make more money than others.So we must study hard to get higher degree. By and large,we try our best to get the degree so that we can find the a good job.