2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

文章在句法方面做的很棒，从句和复杂句的使用不错；文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用高级词汇就更好了；文章结构不错，使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词。

As is showed in the picture that someone who have the higher degree can earn much more money.Worse still,someone who has lower degree, unemployment is up to 14.1%.As far as I am concerned,the degree is important for us to find work.the reason why I say that as follows. At present,the majority of companies are willing to admit person who has high degree.Because it proved you have more abilities than others.In fact,if you have the higher degree,you will find a job easier and you will make more money than others.So we must study hard to get higher degree. By and large,we try our best to get the degree so that we can find the a good job.