2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

过渡词很丰富，衔接词同时使用的恰到好处；作者句法基础不错，可适当增加复杂句的使用；文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用高级词汇就更好了。

Judging by the tables,someone who have the higher degree can earn much more money.Worse still,someone who has lower degree, unemployment is up to 14.1%.As far as I am concerned,the degree is important for us to find work.the reason why I say that as follows. At present,the majority of companies are willing to admit the person who has the higher degree,because it proved you have more abilities than others.In fact,if you have the higher degree,you will find a job easier and you will make more money than others.So we must study hard to get higher degree. By and large,we try our best to get the degree so that we can find a good job.