3.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
文中词汇表达贫乏,但是单词拼写做的不错;文中从句数量过少;文章层次不够分明,缺少组织,需注意文章整体的组织结构。
Dear Mr.and Mrs.Brown, I'm writing to you from my home in China.I returned home safe and sound.When thinking of the wonderful days I spent in New Orleans, I just can't help thinking of both of you.It was so kind of you to have provided everything to make my stay there such a happy
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