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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第52篇:草率的判断是否可信

发布时间:2013-08-19 17:06浏览次数:17590
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作文题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

Snap judgments can never be trusted.

Use reasons and examples to support your opinion.

草率的判断不可信。你同意这种说法吗?给出原因和例子。

字数要求:300字以内。

用户的作文(系统评分70.0分
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语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;可适当增加从句的使用;文中一些高级词汇的使用比较灵活,但请注意单词拼写的检查。

用户练习作文:

t's really hard to say whether the snap judgement can never be trusted, it depends on different situations. Firstly, there are some eligble reasons for the snap judgements. For example, when we meet some indivisual at the first time, the first impression is very significant for us. People can have shortly but a generally judgement towards a person from his or her impression, such your dressing style, the brand of your clothes or wether your face os clean and whehter the beard is shaved. Thus, when you are preparing for an appointment, you should realize that your first impression counts alot. However, on the other hand, the snap judgement which are made carelessly and roughly without any logic considerations and comprehensions are needed to be trusted carefully. For instance, once I wanted to buy a book which was writen by a well-known author, thus I asked for some advices to a friend who had read aboout it to decide whether I should buy it or not. But, my friend told me that this book was a rubbish which is not worthy to concentrate any words in it. Notwithstanding, I bought this book because of my ardent love towards the author of it. After my reading, I had a entirely varied opinion towards my friend, I thought this book is a marvoul of the literature. In all, we have different tastes of the literature. Therefore, it's fortunately that I ignored the snap idea which was given by my friend at that time. In a conclusion, as long as one deeply and thouroughly have a study on a thing with considerations that can make a decision on whether other's snap judgement can be trusted or not.

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