2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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Guangzhou city,the capital city of Guangdong province, which located in the south of China,is my hometown. If my friend going to visit my hometown ,I have some good place want to intruduce. The first place is Canton tower,the landmark building of Guangzhou,was located in Zhujiang New Town.At night, the view is very beautiful ,we can see colorful light for the Canton tower.Besides,there have Guangzhou library ,Guangzhou mesume and so on .whatever,it will be a interested travel.The second place ,I want to intruduce Baiyun Mountain ,it located in Baiyun area.Coming to the Baiyun mountain ,the flesh air,the beautiful flowers and trees will give our a view enjoy.