托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第52篇:草率的判断是否可信

作者词汇基本功很好，高级词汇表达也比较恰当；语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；作者句法基础较为扎实。

Recently,quiet a lot of news report that children's parents stand in line the whole night in order to register to the primary school for their children and some parents even pay the higher fees so as to get a qualification to get enrolled.Under this circumstance,it is clear to see the mania of parents for letting their children begin the formal education however there are still other voices claiming that children should spend most of their time playing.As far as I am concerned, I prefer the choice of starting the formal education as soon as possible for the following reasons. The most significant project for a child is to build up a correct attitude towards life as young as possible and living a healthy and happy life is also a dream for every child's parents.So after considering those factors ,it is easy to get a conclusion that formal education can establish the right attitude more effective than playing.Because children not only can get correct leading and guidance from their teachers but also be monitored and criticized by teachers and even the peers around them. Except the attitude building issues,time and age are also the important factors which need to be considered.As we know,education is not only about building the correct character but about teaching knowledge and spreading wisdom.If children spend most of their time playing ,it is definitely an unwise choice because they just cost the most treasured time to play instead of leaning or acquiring knowledge.Knowledge is treasure which can change the life .Just imaging two people,one is equipped with plenty of knowledge and the other just play all days ,which of the two would you expect to be a more successful person in the future. Still,there might be someone who acclaims that playing can also lead children to get knowledge in a more practice and vivid way which is much more pleasant than just staying at school sitting in the classroom.That is really a truth sometimes that no one can deny.However, the risk that playing to learn costs and time that playing to acquire needs are pretty controversial for no one can make sure that what the children playing are not harmful or dangerous such as hurts themselves physically and even mentally. Considering so much factors,it is really obvious that beginning the formal education at a very early age and spending most of time on school studies are much more better than playing.