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English is one of the working languages in The United Nations. English is an important language for everyone now.When we find a job we must be good at English so that we can get more chances.We can listen to English songs or watch English movies if we learn English well.And there are also many famous books in English.So English is widely used in our life.We must study it harder.Actuallly English is not difficult if you get the right methods and have a good attitude.I think learning languages is very interested when we really like it.Interest is the best teacher. You can watch more English movies that you like.It will help you improve listening.And you'd better remember more words.Writing some words on the small papers and taking it with you is good way to remember words.You can try writing some short articles by yourselves,then let your teacher help you to pratice the skill of writing.They are some of mine to improve English.You can try my adviece and I hope these will help you.
